Using Similes

Last week we were learning to use a simile in our writing about ourselves.  A simile uses the words 'like' or 'as' when we are making a comparison between two things that are not alike.  For example: Sadness is as dark as the sky on a starless night.  Here are some of our attempts:

Kruze

My hands are like wriggly worms.  My nose is pointy like sharp teeth and my eyes are like brown bark.

Truze

My hair is dark brown like my teddy bear and it is fluffy. We like my teddy bear.

Wynter

My arm is like a wobbly snake and my teeth are like hard metal and sharp like a shark.  My hair is like prickly grass.  My nose curves like a worm.

Taonga

My mouth is like a door opening and shutting when I talk and my hands are like sticks.

Isabel

My hair is shimmery like a pond of water.  My eyes are like the inside of a treasure chest.  My smile line is like a wiggly worm.  My teeth are like shark fins.  My fingers are like octopus tentacles.